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Hey, which Englisch are you using in your story?

I try to use strictly American English to the best of my abilities, although there's a chance some British might have slipped in there too. Why?

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Hi Hi!:

“Yeah, ever time I ask her to do feet stuff, she says no. It’s just... annoying. But now..."

ever = every

Love the story, it's so so so hot ^.^

Hey there, thanks! Send me an email octiwriter@gmail.com or DM me on Discord so I can send you a free copy!

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Hi! After the "YouWatch" part, I think you missed the quoting mark and a coma ("I'm a student, man...).

I love all your work. It's awesome!

Thanks man! It makes me really happy hearing people like my content. Write me a message on Discord octiwriter or send me an email intstories.sank590@silomails.com so I can send you a free copy!

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"I didn't have any time to feel his breeze when he put it in his mouth." Breath not breeze maybe...

anyway dude keep up the great work ur awesome !

Thanks! Email me at intstories.sank590@silomails.com or add me on Discord: octiwriter so I can send you a copy

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“Fuck... your ass is so think. I bet your tight hole won’t disappoint either.” I felt his breath on my neck as he hugged me from behind, placing one of his hands on my crotch, rubbing it, and the other one under my shirt. Think > Thick?

Anyway, OH MY GOD it's so hot, hello?!?!

Thanks for the error. And liking it! Give me an email/discord I can send you a download link.

.hyperferret on Discord. Thanks<3!!

Okay I sent you a friend request (IntStories)

Also, you're welcome!