You don't return the kiss. You kissing him wasn't part of the dear. For all you know, he could just be doing this to not end up being a pussy who breaks the rules of the game.
I sent an email with some of the bugs i found while playing the Demo (Some bugs/statements) or something like that was the title. Attached the 4 captures i took too. Pretty sure had something to be with If statements running wild after spamming.
"Rub my crotch. Pretty please," he asks timidly. You move close to him. You put your hand on his tent, moving it around. He releases a small moan. His breathing is now deeper. "P-put your hand under my skirt..," he whispers shyly. You obey his wishes. You slide your hand up his legs, reaching his underwear. You lightly grab his member before you gently caress it. He's as hard as a rock. He's enjoying himself a lot.
After this it doesn't matter what you choose to shoot next, it always says you shoot paper. Seems like the same issue that other guy found but in a different spot?
No, it's the same spot. I just didn't have time to replace it. But since you saw it too, it's only fair I give you a copy. Email me at intstories@proton.me Just comment here when you do thought I only use that email to send copies
"I can help with that," you say and you take your hands and put them on the waistband, sliding his briefs down. You pull them to his legs and take them off completely. He presses his skirt between his legs, hiding his dick from you. His face grows red. "Aww, are you shy to show me your dick?" you ask. "Yes," he says. "But I've been naked this whole time." "So what?" he asks. "It's not fair!" you complain. "Those are the rules. You pick dare and you do what I tell you." "You're right," you stop protesting.
After this part, whichever option you choose,
it shows as if it were paper.
"And you haven't even cummed yet," minor grammatical error (cummed). Could be replaced as "And you haven't even cum yet," past tense of cum is came, but it wouldn't fit here. I didn't attach a screenshot, but "cummed" is also used in the dialogue line if you cum in Lucas, "You... fuck, at least my skirt is clean. I'm glad you cummed in me."; that's where you'd use "came" instead of "cummed".
"Cummed" is nonstandard and apparently it doesn't exist, even if it's very commonly used. I'm not going to change the game as it doesn't change the meaning, but I'll still give you a free copy of the game I promised. Give me an email or discord username so I can send you a download key.
sbs49 on discord; I'll scan through the rest of the dialogue a bit later to see if there's anything else. As a side question, have you considered adding art/pictures to these stories, or are they going to remain purely text?
Okay I'll add you on discord and then I'll send you the download key. As for art, yes. I'm working on that with someone right now. It should be released soon.
Thanks for that, that's a critical error with the if-else statements depending if you pick virgin or not. Give me a discord or email to send you a download key
there’s a few coding errors that occur when i select one choice but the next passage doesn’t match up to the choice i picked. i’m not sure how to explain it but i took some screenshots of the errors.
here’s the first error i encounter.
when i choose option #1 (mc being bigger) the passage is linked to option #2 (mc being smaller) instead and vice versa like below:
images above are shown in order of the options.
+ there’s more but i’m not sure if it’ll fit in this individual comment
sorry i accidentally gave you a gmail that isnt linked to this account so i deleted the comment. i DO have an email but it’s my personal one so id rather not post it publicly. my discord, however, is 1junebug
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nice
You don't return the kiss. You kissing him wasn't part of the dear. For all you know, he could just be doing this to not end up being a pussy who breaks the rules of the game.
i'm assuming you meant dare and not dear
Yeah it was. Add me on Discord octiwriter or email me at intstories.sank590@silomails.com
good game very cute <3
I aint NOT paying 1.50$ for a 607kb game
Okay and?
A cup of espresso costs around 1$
Sadly, not everyone shits money out of their asses to buy every game they see.
Me here, every single game on my computer is pirated
somehow my 10 yr old computer gained some kind of immunity to these viruses
and plus, the country ı live in, espresso costs smt like 300 money
Sorry man.. I hope things get fixed for you soon. The best solution would be to either move or start a business
Nah. ım sorry if my first comment was offensive
Admitting to pirating games is insane work, my guy
And ı dont regret any second of it
So you don't feel any remorse for stealing intellectual property? There's always free alternatives you know.
I sent an email with some of the bugs i found while playing the Demo (Some bugs/statements) or something like that was the title. Attached the 4 captures i took too. Pretty sure had something to be with If statements running wild after spamming.
Novel is fun tho, wish you best of lucks.
Let's cum together," you suggest. You start to jerk yourself off, your body going crazy with each motion.
"Alright, but you still need to tell me where I need to cum..."
If you choose 'in me' it leads to a screen with text but no option moving forward in the story
Okay, fixed. Thanks. Email me at intstories@proton
Oh, but do tell me here when you email me because there's a chance I might not see your email otherwise.
Email sent
"Rub my crotch. Pretty please," he asks timidly.
You move close to him. You put your hand on his tent, moving it around. He releases a small moan. His breathing is now deeper.
"P-put your hand under my skirt..," he whispers shyly.
You obey his wishes. You slide your hand up his legs, reaching his underwear. You lightly grab his member before you gently caress it. He's as hard as a rock. He's enjoying himself a lot.
After this it doesn't matter what you choose to shoot next, it always says you shoot paper. Seems like the same issue that other guy found but in a different spot?
No, it's the same spot. I just didn't have time to replace it. But since you saw it too, it's only fair I give you a copy. Email me at intstories@proton.me Just comment here when you do thought I only use that email to send copies
"I can help with that," you say and you take your hands and put them on the waistband, sliding his briefs down. You pull them to his legs and take them off completely.
He presses his skirt between his legs, hiding his dick from you. His face grows red.
"Aww, are you shy to show me your dick?" you ask.
"Yes," he says.
"But I've been naked this whole time."
"So what?" he asks.
"It's not fair!" you complain.
"Those are the rules. You pick dare and you do what I tell you."
"You're right," you stop protesting.
Thanks man, I'll fix that. Where can I send you a free copy (discord, email)?
Is there any way I can give you my email privately?
I already sent the email.
Okay, I've sent you a copy.
does it work for android?
Yes
The game had me take off my shirt twice for some reason i chose to take it off and then it was magically back on and made me remove it again
Thanks. Give me a discord username or email to send you a download link.
Sent.
After a while, you get used to his size. He starts to move back and forth slowly, trying to find your sweet stop.
Should be "sweet spot" I assume
Yeah, thanks. Give me an email or discord username to send you a download link.
Discord name is the same as here, gabrielwilde.
please make more femboy games
Sure thing. I just need to research more
"You get up from the bed. You unbuckle your pants and slide them down. He doesn't take your eyes off your bulge."
It should be "He doesn't take his eyes off your bulge."
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"You feel so vulnerable. Your friend is shamelessly looking at your dick. He puts his hand and moves his boner."
You're missing some words in the last sentence
Got it, thanks! Give me an email or discord username to send you a download key
Is there a way to message you privately
You can add me on discord intstories or send me an email at intstories@proton.me
"Cummed" is nonstandard and apparently it doesn't exist, even if it's very commonly used. I'm not going to change the game as it doesn't change the meaning, but I'll still give you a free copy of the game I promised. Give me an email or discord username so I can send you a download key.
sbs49 on discord; I'll scan through the rest of the dialogue a bit later to see if there's anything else.
As a side question, have you considered adding art/pictures to these stories, or are they going to remain purely text?
Okay I'll add you on discord and then I'll send you the download key. As for art, yes. I'm working on that with someone right now. It should be released soon.
when i get to the part where he asks guess there is no answers to chose
Thanks for that, that's a critical error with the if-else statements depending if you pick virgin or not. Give me a discord or email to send you a download key
Another thing
Grammatical error:
-There should never be punctuation outside of quotation marks. Having whatever punctuation already inside is fine. It should be as follows:
"Nope. I actually want to see you dressed like that. Come on, my dick is throbbing... please," you beg.
I've been writing for who knows how long and no one told me about that... thanks. Give me an email or Discord username to send you a download key.
Sent
awesome thx
Just a grammatical error, I think it should be "Do you always bottom all the time when you have sex?"
Yup, thanks. Give me an email or discord user to send you a download key.
Discord user is anoobplays
there’s a few coding errors that occur when i select one choice but the next passage doesn’t match up to the choice i picked. i’m not sure how to explain it but i took some screenshots of the errors.
here’s the first error i encounter.
when i choose option #1 (mc being bigger) the passage is linked to option #2 (mc being smaller) instead and vice versa like below:
images above are shown in order of the options.
+ there’s more but i’m not sure if it’ll fit in this individual comment
Thanks!! Do you have an email so I can send you a download link for the game?
sorry i accidentally gave you a gmail that isnt linked to this account so i deleted the comment. i DO have an email but it’s my personal one so id rather not post it publicly. my discord, however, is 1junebug