i dont know if it is a mistake or not but on in the demo on the page where you describe ash, its says he is taller than you. But a few pages further it says bespite being smaller than you maybe i am wrong but idk
Updated! Sorry for the late reply I've been dealing with some personal issues (meaning a dipshit called depression) so I had to step back a bit from my PC. Anyway, pick two games bc I was late and email me octiwriter@gmail.com so I can send you itch.io key links (I really hope what I just said makes sense)
Hi, I’m here to report a possible issue. During the conversation with Ash and the first kiss scene (at least in my run), there’s a mention of "Cum" (or something related) when we never had a scene like that before. It’s literally the second day in the morning, right after breakfast. 🤣🤣
"As the kiss intensifies, you can’t ignore the sensation of his mouth on yours—the way he moves against you, with a hunger that matches your own. His hand slides to the back of your neck, fingers threading through your hair as he pulls you closer. The taste of him, mixed with the saltiness of your own cum, lingers on your tongue, making everything feel raw, more intimate."
I think there is also a way to incorrectly trigger the path where you read Ash's journal without actually taking it, but I couldn't replicate it and figure out what caused it unfortunately.
Hey there, thank you!! I'll fix the mistakes you pointed out and as well as check out the trigger thing. Email me what game you want octiwriter@gmail.com
Nope. That's for the font. I had to change from Harlowe to Sugarcube so... Yeah. That got messed up. I'll fix it soon. Email me what game you'd like octiwriter@gmail.com
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i dont know if it is a mistake or not but on in the demo on the page where you describe ash, its says he is taller than you. But a few pages further it says bespite being smaller than you maybe i am wrong but idk
also after you stop reading ashs yournal its says "you sign as you close the yournal" doesnt sign mean sigh?
Updated! Sorry for the late reply I've been dealing with some personal issues (meaning a dipshit called depression) so I had to step back a bit from my PC. Anyway, pick two games bc I was late and email me octiwriter@gmail.com so I can send you itch.io key links (I really hope what I just said makes sense)
Thanks i'll send you an mail
“You’ll take all of me, Ash. You’ll wait for it.” is ash saying this tho? (this is when you are a bottom)
also “You better come for me,” shouldn't "come" be cum?
Yeah that verb is a bit complicated, but in that scenario I think it's correct. "To cum" = "to come".
"cummed" doesn't exist though.
Plz tell me I replied to you on time. I remember your username, but I'm not sure I gave you a copy.
Fuck my brain.
I'm sorry if I didn't my email is octiwriter@gmail.com
Also I think it's time I made a website for bugs reporting bc I can't keep track of everything.
Ya, making a website would be good, and I would rather pay you for your hard work.
(I dont want a freebie btw)Good stuff, 1000/10 also thank you for not romanticizing trauma :D
I'm so happy you enjoyed it :D Yeah, I was scared I'd romanticize trauma by accident, but I'm glad I didn't.
You did a great job!
In the last sentence, shouldn't there be quotation marks at the end?
I loved this demo btw. Keep writing all these wonderful stories!!! <3
Hey! Yeah, it should be! I'll fix that now. Tell me via email what game you want: octiwriter@gmail.com
Hi, I’m here to report a possible issue. During the conversation with Ash and the first kiss scene (at least in my run), there’s a mention of "Cum" (or something related) when we never had a scene like that before. It’s literally the second day in the morning, right after breakfast. 🤣🤣
"As the kiss intensifies, you can’t ignore the sensation of his mouth on yours—the way he moves against you, with a hunger that matches your own. His hand slides to the back of your neck, fingers threading through your hair as he pulls you closer. The taste of him, mixed with the saltiness of your own cum, lingers on your tongue, making everything feel raw, more intimate."
I'm not sure how that ended up there, but thank you! I'll fix it right away. Let me know which game you'd like via email: octiwriter@gmail.com
Two minor typos I found
1: Early in the game:
"Harders" should be hardens
2: During the snowball fight
"Luckly" should be luckily
I think there is also a way to incorrectly trigger the path where you read Ash's journal without actually taking it, but I couldn't replicate it and figure out what caused it unfortunately.
Good game overall :)
Hey there, thank you!! I'll fix the mistakes you pointed out and as well as check out the trigger thing. Email me what game you want octiwriter@gmail.com
so i found this, is that supposed to be there?
Nope. That's for the font. I had to change from Harlowe to Sugarcube so... Yeah. That got messed up. I'll fix it soon. Email me what game you'd like octiwriter@gmail.com
Nope. I'll get this fixed soon too. Feel free to choose another game you like.
so after doing the bucket list it dosen't let you continue as no option appears in the end
Just fixed this!
also the monopoly choices are reversed for some reason chosing the top hat gives you the car and viceversa
Thanks dude!!!
ill save it for later