Threesome With the Step-Bros?!

There seems to be a minor spelling mistake in the library scenario wherein after picking "say hi back," one of the choices show "Distrub the quietness of the library..."

Hey I found a grammar issue

When you start the game click, 'click here if you wanna skip straight to the sex' then click 'have sex with the bonus character' the main text says ""Mhm. And who would you like to be touched you?" Asks the Doctor."

The proper grammar for that sentence would be 'and who would you like to be touched by you'

You wrote 'memeber' at the start of the play in browser

spelling error (5). Library scene with Robert. "Whipe" should be "wipe" code lines: 1339, 1345, 1351, 1385, 1391.

quote:
"With one last thrust, you feel his hot sperm shoot down your throat. At the same time, your own dick starts twitching and your balls tighten, releasing strings of cum on his feet.
When he's done, he pulls his dick out. "Wow... we made a mess. At least you did." He says looking at his feet.
Lick your cum of his feet.
Whipe it off with a tissue."

there's another grammar error, i think, i found in the code, not the text. I"m not sure what "go straight to the dead" means, perhaps dean?  "Mr. Holland, just what do you think you're doing in an educational facility?! Go straight to the dead."


around code line 341. Quote:

""O-oh, s-something just... just fell on your... on your crotch." At least now you have your proof that he gets embarrassed.(set: $scream to 'yes')

"Mr. Holland, just what do you think you're doing in an educational facility?! Go straight to the dead. You'll be lucky if you don't get sued for sexual assault." One person in the crowd started booing, and the rest followed soon."

Hi, just a little mistake in one of the first passages, after you shake Oliver's hand:

> No one has called your name 'cool before'

Shouldn't it be "No one has called your name 'cool' before", taking the word before out of the quote?

I'm a little confused about something. 

The spoilers mention how there is a scene with public sex in the bathroom, however as far as I can tell (in both my playthroughs and glancing over the code), there is no scene for that. Did I miss something?

If you ever need some assistance with editing, proofreading, coding, anything really… You may contact me on discord at 1junebug and I could help you out for free because I have the skills so I might as well put them to use.

Anyway, I have a few suggestions that would help increase the quality and emersion of your interactive games. 

1. Add a save / load system on games with multiple endings. It would be useful because it’s difficult to restart the game and try out different choices without a save system.
2. Proofread and edit your game before releasing final versions. This includes code.
3. Experiment with different color palettes, fonts, backgrounds, etc. Test out different styles that reader’s could choose from. (dark mode/light mode)
4. Experiment with story elements. I know that this game in specific is more erotica > plot, but providing some additional characterization and mood to the mix can ensure your story stays unique and not repetitive.

He unzips his pants and slides them down, followed by his black boxers. He takes his shoes off and before you know it, he's almost fully naked. His member is rock hard, reading to be pleasured

I think its supposed to say ready, i'm not sure though

Hi I dont know if its intencional but on the second page there is a little mistake:

"You can get access to all my games for 2.99$ on my Patreon. The link is in the description. If you already are a MEMEBER, click here to claim your game."